Monday, 9 September 2019

enviro rap

2 comments:

  1. I like your rime.
    I like that face you have done at the end.
    I think you need to work on comers.

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  2. hi Connor
    thanks for the feedback. Yes I think I probably should have added more commas.
    thanks for the comment!
    from Rebekah

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